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An excellent use of various copyrighted materials.

Although I'm sure you have not payed royalties on a single one.

I am not sure what this was. Inside jokes do not play well with the average Newgroundite, unless it is in the form of an entertaining piece of flash. But this just appeared to me as a collection of random video of people sword fighting with paper towel rolls to the Star Wars theme.

A nice change in pace...

It's nice to see something on Newgrounds every now and then that isn't just mindless garbage. You should see about getting this distributed further. Good job!

That was alright..

Man, that must have taken a long time to draw up.. You are a very talented individual..

However, I'd like to see you hit up the Audio Portal, and stop using copyrighted material for your music.. It's fairly simple to rip music off of a CD, but it's not fair to those few honest people on Newgrounds that abide by protection laws.

I liked it, but...

If this were to be a tribute to some fellow named Jeremy as is stated in the credits, it was cheapened not only by the lame trailer in the menu, but by the scream following the credits.. I don't quite understand the significance of the scream, other than an attempt to startle folks at the end.

The whole thing was very, very complex. And I liked that it was all backwards.. You understand why everything is messed up towards the end.

I didn't feel any kind of sadness as most have, I simply wouldn't understand how this could envoke such emotions. Especially if it is a tribute to someone.. It's rather insensitive. The enigmatic little blip at the end that this is a tribute makes me wonder if there really is a person named Jeremy.

And in response to the inquiry about a young woman having half her brain removed in recent years.. I know her, she lives a block away from me. She isn't paralyzed, and she is able to function normally for the most part.. It was a big risk she took, but she was having multiple seizures everyday, and it was the only way to remedy that.

Oh my..

Now I've hated Foamy for a long time, but decided months ago never to give a bad review to any of these shorts ever since I was instant messaged by some 13 year old child at about 3 in the morning while I was sleeping to tell me that I was stupid or something.. But this one caught my attention simply because there were many bad reviews..

Just as Foamy says, this is the worst script ever written. It had something for maybe the first thirty seconds, but then it starts to drag. Really, really bad. It's a shame that Foamy has bumper stickers available at Hot Topic, cause I don't think anyone's buying them.

That was great..

One of the better things I've seen lately.. And it's great that Knox was in on it too.

Hmm..

Yes, Ben Spurgin. I'm sure the future of flash animation is using music you have not paid royalties for. Genius!

Not bad at all for your first attempt..

You're on the right track.. The drawings and animation were alright, although lacking detail and a little hard to see, being that they were so tiny. It seemed to drag a bit, though.. And I don't understand the signifigance of "Chewy". You mention him both in the short and in your description, yet he plays quite an insignificant role.

Good work, keep it up!

neogeo0823 responds:

thanks for the review. chewy will be making a cameo style appearance in each movie. sorta like my trademark...kinda...thing... anyway, i think ill end up making him the kids pet and he will begin to play more significant roles in later movies. but right now its just an idea. well have to see how the the stories play out...

an obvious theft of copyrighted material

Hey, that's fantastic that you can make front page by taking someone else's creation, altering it a little bit, and then putting it on a motorcycle. Genius. Next we'll start seeing submissions with protected music... Oh wait, that's been going on for years.

I'll bet you think you're clever...

While the animation is well done and the art is also nice, the concept of this cartoon is similar to jokes I would hear young children telling amonst themselves. I have not seen one of these cream filling commercials in years, I think you might be a little late in delivering your parody.

I'm just some guy who likes to play video games. That's about it.

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